|
Title:
Culture Shock By:
Junkfoodmonkey Rated:
PG Summary:
Hannibal has to deal with a new experience. People may be the same all over
but they don't behave the same all over. A vignette featuring Hannibal and
Madari, an OC from my Qumar stories (starting with Settlement in case you
haven't read them.) I think this can still work if you haven't read them. Timeframe
is after my story Tightrope Walk. And it's exactly 600 words long. Disclaimer:
The A-Team doesn't belong to me; I'm not making any money from this.
|
Culture Shock
The first time
Madari held his hand Hannibal was a little shocked.
Okay, Colonel, he
told himself, stay calm, he's not propositioning you. It's an Arab thing.
They were walking
from Madari's house on their way to dinner at the home of one of his friends. "It's
this way," Madari had said, indicating a turn on the right. He took
Hannibal's elbow as they turned and then he took Hannibal's right hand in his
left.
Nothing odd about
it, Hannibal reassured himself. Seen lots of Arab men holding hands. It's just
their way. Faris probably isn't even aware he's doing it. He resisted the urge
to pull away, not wanting to offend Madari. It's an honour really, he supposed,
tried to accept it in that spirit. But it still felt strange.
When had he last
held a man's hand? Apart from when he or they had been hurt or sick? It had to
have been his mother's funeral. Walking behind the casket holding his father's
hand. Before that it must have been grade school. Until the day when the idea
of holding another boy's hand had suddenly flipped from being just natural to
being irredeemably sissy.
They walked on,
talking, but Hannibal found it hard to concentrate on the conversation. He was
distracted by the strange sensation of the male hand in his own. By the size of
it and the roughness of the skin. Could he ever get used to doing this, or was
he too old now to change the habits of a lifetime? And that led him to wonder
if Madari ever thought it strange how little his American friends touched each
other, despite their closeness.
As they approached
the door of his friend's house Madari seemed to suddenly notice what he was doing.
His eyes widened and he pulled his hand away quickly. He seemed about to speak,
but then their host came out and there was no time to talk.
Later in the
evening Hannibal stepped outside for a breath of air. His head was spinning a
little. He'd decided to try out his Arabic as much as possible with the other
guests. This was taking a lot of concentration on his part, and, he suspected,
a lot of patience and good humour on theirs. He lit a cigar, and then turned as
he heard someone come out of the door behind him.
"Hannibal, you
can smoke inside, if you wish," Madari said.
"Oh yeah, I
know. Just getting some air. You want a cigar?"
"Thank
you." Hannibal lit it for him. They stood side by side smoking. The night
sky was indigo blue fading to violet at the horizon, thickly studded with
stars.
"Beautiful
night." Hannibal said.
"Yes."
Madari agreed. "A little cold." He was quiet for a moment, then
cleared his throat, said, "Hannibal, I apologise for earlier. I hope I
didn't offend you."
"What, holding
my hand?" Hannibal turned his head to look at Madari. "Hell, no. It
was a little – um - different. But I wasn't offended."
"I didn't
think about what I was doing. I'm sorry. I know you are not used to that."
"Faris, it's
not a problem." Hannibal reassured him. "Even an old dog like me can
learn new tricks. I guess it's a compliment, shows you think of me as a close
friend. I'm not going to get offended by that."
"You know I
consider you a good friend."
"So let's not worry about it." He turned back to look at the sky. After a moment he spoke again.
"You probably
shouldn't try it with BA though."
end
Home
Send Me Feedback
© Elizabeth Charles 2005